tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8833171664567107121.post1798785688188664080..comments2023-06-02T06:16:45.341-07:00Comments on Rhianna Slack BA (Hons) CG Arts & Animation: Film Review - Metropolis (1927)Rhianna Slackhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08350746077618017672noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8833171664567107121.post-36079997151569233802013-10-17T22:38:01.532-07:002013-10-17T22:38:01.532-07:00A very thorough and enjoyable review Rhianna - wel...A very thorough and enjoyable review Rhianna - well done!<br /><br />My comments this time are going to be small niggly ones really; firstly, make sure that you always put the names of films in italics - not only the film you are reviewing, but any others that you are comparing it to also. <br />Likewise, the quotes; they need to be italicised, and then the author's name goes directly after, along with the date, all in brackets. So for example, (Pierce, 2003).<br />In your first sentence, you introduce the director, Fritz Lang. After this, you only need to refer to him as Lang, not his first name too.<br />Try and include some more images next time - you are talking a lot here about the architecture, for example, so it would have been good to see an illustration of this futuristic city. It also makes your discussion easier, as you can refer to the image within your text.<br /><br />Well done, I really enjoyed reading this! :)Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com